section 5. Character Outlines.

NAME: Martin James Hallwood
AGE: 32
OCCUPATION: Senior manager of Markerstone Industries.


Martin is a level headed quick thinker who's ambition in life has allowed him to quickly become an important member of a high class company (Markerstone  Industries) although Martin is a completely rational man he has a darker side hidden within him. due to the constant demand of his job Martin became extremely stressed and depressed. searching for solution to his problems martin turn to alcohol but whilst under the influence his personality compleatley switches and he becomes reckless and violent. Due to this relliance on alcohol

Section 11. audience feedback.

After putting our thriller onto youtube it has been watched over 58 times. people who have watched it left some interesting comments below.

egnoring the fact that alot of them were just excited to see paul in my film they gave some very interesting feedback. they have commented upon hiow much they liked the lighting used as well as comments on how they feel the sequence could be improved if the actors showed a little more emotion. alot of people liked the theme of the paint crossing out the next victim wich i agree upon as it shows the killer being systematic as well as the red representing the blood of the victim. two people have said they enjoyed the camera angles we used as well as many people saying the soundtrack fit very well with it creating an intence atmosphere. another person discribed the sequence as being criptic wich is exactly the word for the armosphire i was trying to create. from what i know all of the people that commented upon the sequnce was within our target audience ranging between 18 and 30 years old.

Section 8. story boards

Story board part 9 missing. alternately watch this.

Section 10. log sheets

i have chosen the best shots to use out of those taken. when editing i plan on using fades to and from black, and dissolve fades to bring the map into the main part of the scene. i will also smoothly cut each shot so the every action looks smooth and that there are no continuity errors.